Talk:Plants vs Zombies Legacy/@comment-26478980-20190729135415

Ok, this is the project so far that has been most on edge whether I'm going to approve it or not. Unfortunately, I decided that I cannot approve it for a large variety of minor reasons:


 * 1) The grammar in some places isn't very great.
 * 2) That reception section is really tough to read, it could be done much better, maybe in a bullet point list.
 * 3) I feel like you put too much in sub-pages: plot, plants, zombies, achievements, and soundtracks. If you made individual world pages, you could get rid of the plot, achievements, and soundtracks sub-pages.
 * 4) A lot of the sections here don't have much detail, only a couple sentences. As I said before, it's best to repeat information rather than leave it out accidentally.

There are a few others, but they're so minor, I'm not even going to mention them. Overall, though, I like the concept.