Thread:BananaStorm/@comment-27591597-20171006204613/@comment-27591597-20171015230150

BananaStorm wrote: Venera651 wrote: Alrighty. Now then, as for making the Hero, hmmm...

For coding, I can help you AAAAAALLLLLL on the coding for the page and such. As for the hero idea, like I've said, can't really help if you don't have a baseline for it.

Well, what do you want it to be based on? I mean, put 3 options?

Also, what side

a. (Plant) Chinese Fleeceflower root (look it U P ) - Plantman

b. (Plant) Spineapple - Sir Stabalot

c. (Zombie) Knight of the Living Dead + Jack-o-Lantern for a head because why not - The Bodyless Gourdman

.3. Bodyless Gourdman......I like it.

Anyway, thanks for the help. Alrighty. I've seen your page (a tiny baby bud of a page uwu so kawaii~), and I have a few comments.

First of all, COME ON

YOU CAN'T JUST MISPELL THE DAMN TITLE LIKE THAT

Don't worry, you can rename the page (says so when you try to go to Classic Editor .3.)

Personally I prefer "The Bodyless Gourdman" over "Bodyless Gourdman".

Like

Imagine a Plant shouting, "It's the Bodyless Gourdman!"

Now imagine a Plant shouting "It's The Bodyless Gourdman!"

The tiny differences make it count, mate

Back to page review *cough*

A few spelling+grammar errors, lots of incorrect terminology, formatting is Okay, all in all very minor but annoying errors.

All in all, the page is pretty...good-ish.

One thing I have to say is that I noticed it's a Zombie Hero. Yet it has 2 Plant superpowers and 1 Zombie superpower, not including its signature. I mean, since you're taking my idea, I suggest you make it have the majority of superpowers depending on what side the Hero fights for.

For instance, instead of Root Wall/Heroic Health/ Nut Signal (2 Guardian superpowers and 1 Hearty superpower, implying a Plant-dominant Hero (or something)), I'd recommend swapping out the Root Wall for a Rock Wall. Or something. Up to you, I guess.

I could also assist in making this page, if you'd like. Maybe you're busy watering your Mushroom Grotto or the like. I could spiffy up the page a bit, add appropriate hyperlinks, icons for special abilities, make it look hella legit. Well, let me know what you think about that. (please make it ASAP .3.) I won't add anything else, though. Just fix up what's already been laid down, ya know.

.w.